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Re: The Third Wizard War
Yeah, everybody except me. Nobody's ever included me in anything. I was no more than next a shadow to them. I was less than a ghost, for even they got ...
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Re: Death rise
He nodded. "Like the shadow I am, stalking the night I called myself Shadow," he said. He looked at the girl. "Hazel," he said purposely extending every syllable. "That is ...
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Re: Death rise
Her question had struck a nerve that not even the fires of his surroundings had. "I... don't know," he said. "I was raised in an orphanage, they only gave us ...
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Re: The Third Wizard War
How do I fit in with all this? If these kids still suspect me... dear God are they going to use me as decoy? Saul shivered. His pajamas looked rather ...
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Re: Death rise
"I have read many books through out my life time," Shadow said, "for however short a time." His voice choked up. He bent over and coughed. The acrid stench of ...
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Re: Death rise
"Aghh! Son of a- Aghh!" Shadow said picking himself up off the fiery brimstone. He did not dare touch his back, for he knew his very flesh had been peeled. ...
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Re: The Third Wizard War
(In character) Saul sighed. "What if I lent my wand to Kale?" "Are you sure?" Alex said uncertainly. "I've already done ,any bad things with it... some which I can't ...
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Re: The Third Wizard War
Hm, but still... the back and forth wand passing.
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Re: Tears of Fire(Would like readers/reviewers)
Thank you Light_Devil! you have given me great feedback. Goodness I never really noticed how oddly I wrote this part of my story. It's radically different than the middle and ...
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Re: Death rise
Come on I started the setting for you people. Now you can just come in and introduce your equally twisted personal.
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Third Wizard War
Could he have caught it in the wild? He does have magical powers you know. :? He didn't have to buy one from Diagon Alley. (Probably spelled that wrong)
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Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
Shadow Man heard footsteps coming from around a corner. They pounded on the marble floor. Shadow Man knew they were the steps of a highly trained warrior. Did the King ...
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Re: The Third Wizard War
Saul took Alex's hand and shook it. He didn't know the proper way that Wizards shook hands, but he did know muggle formality. Alex pulled back earlier than a muggle ...
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Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
So it says that .rtf can be used on here. But when I try and upload with that format I get a message saying that format is not allowed. Any ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Tears of Fire(Would like readers/reviewers)
This is my novel. Some chapters are very long, others are quite brief. The first chapter of my book is easily the weakest part, so please do help me with ...
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