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Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
There is an evil character. Name: The shadow man (He grew up an orphan so not even he knows his real name) What is he: A mysterious figure who pops ...
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Re: New kid... GET HER!
Whats' AW?
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Re: Anarchy
There is so many looters that the cops are arresting that they are overwhelmed. And the car is blanketed in shadow because the sky is dark because of the storm ...
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Re: No One Would Miss Me ~ Kingdom Hearts
Oh, I love the Kingdom Heart series. It may very well be my favorite video game franchise. Who would have known that Square Enix and Disney making a game together ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Flight: un-retirement chapter two: Infiltration
I was thinking the same thing about why females in fantasy stories are exaggeratedly gorgeous. But, to cover for that you can say something how laws have been passed in ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Flight: un-retirement chapter one: Briefing
Yes, the grammar could use some tinkering with. I think the first reviewer pretty much went over the wall with that so I'll be moving on. Again, like the previous ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Invasion of Israel
OK, I'll edit this as soon as I can. And, I have a different section where people who weren't expecting the war witness it happening, and they are very, very ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: How do reviews work?
I can't figure out how to do those fancy reviews that I'm seeing. It makes me look like a lazy uncaring bum if I don't review anybody's work.
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Invasion of Israel
(The family in the piece below consists of devote Jews. Don't let the religious hints put you off though, they aren't too big. The setting is in an Israeli desert. ...
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Re: Helicopter Battle over the neighborhood
Somewhere not too far off Andrew could hear firecracker like machine gun fire coming from the helicopters. Stacey cupped her hands over her ears. Daniel pulled into a street that ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Anarchy
Andrew felt his pulse racing, the downtown area was an absolute nightmare. Stores were demolished their items lying about on the road. A gas station had exploded obliterating an antique ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Uh, hi?
Hi, I'm new to this site to. Nice to meet you. I have problems with short stories to. They just expand and expand and the ending never seems to come.
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Troubled teen girl
I have already included the pregnant thing into my story. Only she isn't sure at first, because she is very sure that she took every precaution to prevent it. And ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Hello, im a new member
My favorite color is blue. My favorite life shortening food is pizza. My favorite number is three. My favorite cartoon hero is batman, (I'm glad his newest Blockbuster was successful). ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Troubled teen girl
Thanks, yeah I did think the cutting was a cliched idea. And it's true what you are saying it really is hard to think of an alternate to using that. ...
Dec 30, 2009
