AspiringAuthorA..M.

I'd say Texas. They say everything is bigger in Texas. There are various cities in the state that you can choose from Dallas, San Antonio, or the coastal Houston. Or ...

In my novel there is a character that is very troubled. She has no real friends but she still has parties at her house and kids do come because she ...

I would love feedback, I haven't gotten any of it at my school. I am truly desperate for it. Thank you person below me. -Adrian

Review a piece of my story on the narrative poetry forums titled: An action moment from my book

Sort of reminds me of the book I'm writing. We both have some pretty troubled characters.

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Note to readers: Snowey is a rabbit. Chile is a chinchilla, (an adorable gray rodent with a bushy squirrel tail) The action takes place in a silver sports car during ...

Wow, I love the action moment. And I love the name talon, makes him sound like a predatory bird and a real bad person. And if you can do that ...

Oh no tragedy. Well actually my book is the most tragic kind of tragedy, it can be quite depressing. Even for me as the writer.

Thanks, and yes the story does become quite intense for various reasons that I won't tell here. An author spoiling his own work is a criminal to literature.

Chapter 1 The Dream and Dreamers(Note: not all the character's thoughts are in itallics it would have taken forever since apparently they don't transfer from my original copy) Ignore the ...

Hi everybody. Well let me just get to the point. I joined this website because I wanted people to read pieces of a novel that I have been working on ...