AspiringAuthorA..M.

A candy black market? That's sort of what's happening in my school too. Hey, maybe I could incorporate that into this novel. :)

Hello Captain Crunch, I'll be your evil reviewer tonight. Alright, before I start let me just tell you that your title had me assuming that this would be about a ...

Banned for existing. :)

With so many views and no input? Ah, that makes me sad. Not hearing what anybody has to say. I want to know what I can tweak.

Thank you so much. I'll see that the typos get addressed and see what I can do about the info dump of things. :)

Banned for loving to ban me. *Even number*

Banned for having an odd number.

Banned for most likely being correct about her being scared. *That post has an even number of words* *That one does too* *This too*

Tears of Fruit Torrents of rain pelted Bijal's uniform as he patrolled the market. The droplets glistened as they slid down the water-resistant material. Other uniformed men walked with him. ...

You're banned for having an odd number of words in your post.

You get a YWS skeleton. *An inactive member* -inserts coin-

Banned for backing away slowly with hawk.

Christmas Eve, and I sat shivering in the trenches, my body covered in frozen mud. Gunshots and explosions rang out around me, and the pain as the reverberating soundwaves all ...

This long piece wasn't supposed to explain everything. ;) After all it's part of my second novel. Sequel to Tears of Fire. :P

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