AspiringAuthorA..M.

Banned for confusing me. *Arghh, I'm trying to figure it out too* :smt096 :smt119 :smt095 :smt101 :pirate1:

Jelly. What is your favorite movie genre?

Oliver gazed at the distant sky with tear glazed eyes. A star was streaking across the heavens toward them. Not a marvelous shooting star, but a uranium death star. He ...

You get the carcass of a little girl. -inserts Aztec Gold coin- *Get the reference?* (Hint: Johnny Depp starred in the movie)

Oh my, thank you very much, I do see as that can be a problem. Kind of like: The dog sounded like a dog. :wink:

So I edited this chapter the best I could. It came out of me since I wasn't given anything specific to tweak. *Sigh* Grammar is my enemy. :smt102

I'm AspirringAuthorA..M. and I would love to help you out in your journey as a writer. *Clears throat* All of us in the YWS would love to do that. :smt006

Hm, I'll find a way to work with that. Originally I had the girl go almost two months before she noticed she was pregnant. When I thought that was a ...

Banned for reading my message in which I comment your new avatar. *I sent it to you before I saw the post above me* :wink:

Howler, that was an incredible story. Everything about it was enjoyable. The sentence structure made it read smoothly. I don't think I've ever found a story on here as easy ...

This is me without my mask. No, I'm not the cool looking guy. That would be Frosty the Snowman. He's the coolest Hip-Hop artist in town. *He's wearing my scarf ...

How long could a teenage girl go before noticing that she is pregnant? Assuming she did not bother to test herself for pregnancy?

You get a human head. -inserts coin-

You get a botulised hamburger that has been heating out in the sun for days. -inserts coin-

I hope I gave the characters enough back story earlier on in the story. Several pieces prior to this one. :)