AspiringAuthorA..M.

Hello irsihfire. :smt039 I will put my comments and suggestions in bold font. I will put words and phrases/sentences that confuse me, or are obvious mistakes in blue. I shall ...

I haven't finished the review yet, but what I've read is nice, though I am finding quite a bit of technical issues. I hope I'm not just restating what someone ...

Of course. :P Do you think that by fixing the mistake you pointed out and by adding an extra phrase to the end of the paragraph that it sounds better? ...

Common courtesy right? Will you give me the link? :P

Banned for laughing. :P

Stephanie's eyes spasticly shifted around. I'm not crazy. I'm not crazy. I'm not crazy. Half of the Devas glanced at her worriedly. She looked away and stared at her fellow ...

Banned for your gender thingy being pink. :P

You're looking for boogers? :smt088 Oh bloggers. :smt026 I went there, but I was confused. I've never been a part of a blog so... yeah. :smt017

*A crackling squish, accompanied by the flow of spider innards* :P

Yes, the again, maybe it was just the lighting. :lol: Will you read my Twilight Parody irishfire?

Oliver surveyed the people in yellow, baffled. What in Hollywood was going on? He didn't remember any of this in the original script. He tapped James on the shoulder. James ...

Thank you both Durrie and Ben. :P I just did a bit of editing to it based on what Durrie pointed out. I'm sure I didn't catch every one though. ...

Yes, I do like mint. And I did ask a question irishfire. :lol: But OK, new question. Do you know anybody with green eyes? *To this day I have never ...

I don't know what Pi is. Why does communism always turn out bad when the basic principal of equality that it conveys is good?

It's a parody of what you said you wouldn't review. The protagonist is the General of the US Army. :P