AspiringAuthorA..M.

Indeed, it is a very good zombie book. I loved every minute of it. The style that it was written in was so easy to devour. As gruesome as it ...

I think it would be awesome to be Cato. Bad guys are funner to play.

Jurassic Park, a visually revolutionary movie, but the book is just so much more mesmerizing and deep.

Hehe, that was enjoyable. :smt023

7/10 The additional sentence rather weakened it, as did the "that is". Perhaps just a comma would have done and that extra info could be out, since it adds no ...

8/10 I did very much like the imagery. Stacey walked along the dew moistened grass, which hugged the road.

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Jurassic Park: An entrepreneur and his scientists bring dinosaurs back to life, starting a theme park.

He would have broken bones, his internal organs would be ruptured, blood would ooze from his mouth. He would do nothing, for he would be dead. What would your character ...

He would not be as afraid as the average person. He knows that sharks do not consider humans prey. Never the less, he would be apprehensive. What would your character ...

*Sorry Rosey* :( She would stay where she was and weep. What would your character do if a show that she was going to watch at a local theatre was ...

7/10 Not because it feels like deja vu. (Darn it, I forgot the quotation marks) "Daniel had no clue as to how he ended up in the middle of a ...

He would kill it by shooting it with a grenade launcher equipped with incendiary rounds.

She looked at the pretty house.

Not a fan? Have you read my parody? If you hate action stories, then I advice you not. :lol: