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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem

    Hello there, Dogsrule5/RadiantShadow. I'm Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I would like to thank you for touching something so important. So many people shrug off the fact that bullying ...

    Nov 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Single Red Rose

    Hello there, Sharon1407. This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I find that the poem's topic is somewhat cliche. You weren't quite original when you brought up the rose ...

    Nov 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Dont worry

    Hello there, Remembrance! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ You're approaching a very important topic in a very touching way, which is good for the reader judging from...recent ...

    Nov 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Nigeria

    Hello there, Timex282! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I've seen some political poetry about Nigeria/the Nigerian Government before. I don't know very much about foreign politics, so ...

    Nov 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Bestfriends

    Hello there, Rahul20gandhi07! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I'm going to begin with the title. Auto correct is telling me that best friends is two words, instead ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: a broken piece of art

    Hello there, DeepRoses! This is Moonwatcher here with another review! ^-^ I see some more improvement in the imagery department, and I love what I'm seeing. One thing I do ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain says peek-a-boo

    Hello there, DivergentDemigod! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ You really had me there, at the end, and I was enjoying the poem so far. It's a shame ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: My Nights(Part 2)

    Hello there, Casanova! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ You begin by telling the reader that there's been a change, a shift in attitude. You tell the reader ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mysterious Stranger Sestina Poem

    Hello there, Spongebobgirl9! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I'm personally not a fan of repetition or rhyming. And I dislike it even more when it's put together. ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Krampus the ancient Ch.8 Smoke

    Hello there, Jpwriter! This is Moonwatcher here for a review on your chapter! ^-^ I haven't read the previous installments of your book, and I apologize if I get anything ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: journey to oasis/ps. apocalypses story

    Hello there, TY1l3R! This is Moonwatcher here for a review, and to knock this out of the Green Room! I agree with the things that the previous reviewers mentioned. Everything ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Where does personality come from?

    Hello there, Hockeybro0017! This is Moonwatcher here to review your poem! ^-^ I feel as if stanzas could definitely help this poem out when it comes to flow and appearance. ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: When we met again (Real Life Short Story 2)

    Hello there, Remembrance! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ This is a rather touchy topic, so I won't be voicing too many of my opinions on the matter. ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Please Change

    Hello there, GreenTulip! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ I'm going to start off by saying that I don't really agree with the last review. The last reviewer ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: what new universe

    Hello there, Yakitsa! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ At first I wasn't going to review this, because it just seems as if this poem is leagues above ...

    Nov 6, 2016


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