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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Crazy Thin Cow!

    Lol, thanks, my only goal is to entertain :D

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Three Words of Pleasure

    Wow! Thanks! Harsh, but useful.

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Three Words of Pleasure

    What about now? I changed it for you, lol, although the way i normally wrote it was understandable.

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 12:04 Part one

    I'm not a good reviewer, but when i reached to the word Poop-head, i laughed my head off :D

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Junior Accountant (Chp.1)

    Thanks Mo! Love the reveiw! Yeppers Peppers! lo0ol!

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: House of Mirrors

    It was confusing a bit, but i got it in the end.. This man's got talent for writing poems and stuff.

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Such a Beautiful Girl

    That was excellent, i wish i can write poetry like that~! Keep it UP!

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Junior Accountant (Chp.1)

    Thanks for the reveiws! Amy i wanted to show the reader how lifeless and boring Jason is, this is only 1 chapter, you have no idea what else was going ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Rohan - Prologue: War and Tragedy

    well.. many mistakes.. thanks, i'll fix them all. Its a prologue so nothing really seems to make sense, i understand what you mean. Again, thanks for the review. its exams ...

    Jan 16, 2010


Memories, left untranslated, can be disowned; memories untranslatable can become someone else’s story.
— YiYun Li