AtticusGallows

D: ahh I did do that! Yes, I know I trapped myself, but I tried to make it work. Thanks for the advice though. Very much appreciated. :D

I don't know but everything just felt better. I couldn't say it right, so I wrote it down in this letter. The first thing I felt. I gotta say was ...

I can’t remember anything. I hear a voice; it’s coming from the other side of the door. This brings up the questions; where am I? What day is it; what ...

:D I really liked this. I knew what you were trying to do with the italics and bolding. I liked the style. It's different, it's daring, it's you. I can ...

"The first step - especially for young people with energy and drive and talent, but not money - the first step to controlling your world is to control your culture. ...

Nice! Is this dragon rockin' ear piercings too? lol this is bad ass.

I really like the flow. It has nice rhythm. The breaking of the sentences was another nice touch. I think this is very well put together, and I must give ...

Hey man welcome to Yws. I'm new here too I just joined yesterday. Thanks for sharing your post I really enjoyed it! I loved the whole concept of the fire ...

:elephant: This was absolutely amazing! Gah, you paint such a beautiful picture. I love how you made me hear the violins. And how they followed the mood that was being ...

Whoa man, what the hell is going on? I found myself laughing at a lot of this, but I really didn't know why. I found "That one boy from spy ...

It reminds me of 'GardenState'

D: I didn't see the part that said this was a poem. So I take back what I said earlier. This is awesome.

Hey, hows it going. I like the whole concept of this rough draft! I think it's very cool how you used child like terms (crayons, coloring books, etc) to represent ...

Hey, very good. I like this poem :D

This was pretty interesting. I liked the first part a lot more then part set in Paris. It grabbed my attention a lot more. I want to know what other ...