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Chapter One
It's kind of rough, but be brutal. Well-dressed figures swirled in the ballroom, for the moment careless to the events occurring in the world outside. Merry music resonated from musicians ...
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Prologue
I'm purposely not describing the people much, but tell me if you like how that works or not. Also, do you think overall it works as a prologue? Would you ...
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Chapter Two
Hey everyone. So this is the second chapter of my story, first chapter can be found here:post679790.html#p679790You don't really need to read the first chapter, though it would help.It's kind ...
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Chapter Three
Hey everyone. First two chapters here and here.post679790.html#p679790topic63494.html-------- “Of course, everyone knows Madame Verdon is simply a dreadful hostess,” said Madame Breton, as she sat
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Chapter Four
So I edited the last chapter to make Adele appear less weak; I hadn't realized how weak she seemed. And then I edited it for a number of other things ...