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Re: Change of Heart.::.One
It was nice. A couple of grammar errors. It was a bit too long, for my tastes, but it was a good plot line and everything. You did quite a ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: You are who you pretend to be
Very nice. I really enjoyed it. For a 15 minute poem, this is very very well written!
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: The Edge of the Earth
This is great! I love how it gives the facts, but still captures you! Also, welcome to YWS! What a great story! I look forward to reading more on it!
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Flesh-Cases
I'm not a poet, or that old, but I like it. It's a very emotional poem, but nice. You did a great job with it!
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Very nicely written. you include yur feelings, setting, and characters very well. Great job!
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Pranks
Thank you, and thank you! I'm fixing those errors now! :)
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry
Beautiful piece. Not that I'm an expert poet or anything, but I liked it. I didn't see any grammar faults and it flowed very nicely. What was your main theme ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Cholerparagon - Profile
That was an awesome dragon! I have a story called the Baby Dragon. If you like stories, you might want to read it!
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
That was awesome. I love it. PERIOD. I love it and that is all there is to it. I will be reading the first chapter when it comes out, or ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: An Ethereal Being
Very nice. I like it and have no bad comments about it! Great Job, and i hope to read some more wonderful poems by you! Audrey718
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Reading
Thanks for the review! I'll get to those grammar errors! ~Audrey718~
Nov 4, 2011