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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Pigeon cannot writ poam.

    Yo, the 2nd one is so glorious. It's actually very vivid, effective imagery here and I love how you concluded it. So much! And the 3rd actually made me laugh ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: K's Kyrielle

    I just want to glomp the second. Can I just glomp it? That is so lush. You give us enough to run with our imaginations and go places. 3rd was ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Niteowl's Nonsensical Nothingness

    Your choice of 'quantify' is so delicious in all its layer of meanings. I also liked the sound and aesthetic appeal of ferrozine. I took it all in first before ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Kay's Kooky Kitty Korner(I know, not a k...)

    D'aaaaw kitty! C: I really like 3, it really did take me through until the end of stanza 2 for me to realize it was a cat, so it intrigued ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: *gasp* Mesh Masticates Madness!

    Everytime I read one of your poems I just about erupt with squeals, like a cat. Like this. 8D Persy showed me.

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Persy's Promiscuity Pertaining to Poetry

    These are so crisp, clean and minimalism goodness. In other words, they resonate pretty far.

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013

    So much content and not just quantity either! How are you doing this? Your first is like... I really want some cookies and hugs now. :c 1.5 has so many ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Indie's Incandescent Inscriptions

    Indie's poems are like: there's a mini narrative in every bite! ^_^ I love the minimalism of the last one and the voice you bring to all of these. The ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Lemony's Lovely Little... Lounge?

    P: You can use anything in poetry, Lems. I use all sorts of !@#!

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: The Metrical Mediocrity of Methrirr's Musings.

    There is so much torment and struggle and hardship evoked in this poem ;_; By the end I was actually truly sad :c What an effective voice!

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rydia's Repository

    I don't think I tell you enough about how much I love your poetry. The 1st is my favorite. It's just that first stanza and the sounds and the play ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: SkyeJane's Red House Ramblings

    Oooh Skye, your first one is really interesting. I live in like humidville, so it was cool that you were able to bring this experience of living in dryheat. No ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Animal's Awesome Arrangements

    I like how you tap into emotions, run with it, and free throw. It's pleasant.

    Apr 4, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Aley's Corner

    I love the imagery of the first. I really get this sense of banging open those shutter windows and like broadway-musical-singing to the top of your lungs while birds chirp ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Solvy's Nest

    Remind me not to mess with you when you're mad. P: I esp. liked that debauchery dressing in white line. First one is my favorite, the images there are so ...

    Apr 3, 2013


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