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Sarah, Admittedly, I'm no fan of end-rhymes and that's an understatement. I mostly hate it used in general, but kudos to you for sticking it out and delivering. At first ...

Hey Tinydancer, This is a touching piece. I like what you did there with the glasses, I find that so often when we mourn a person, we mourn all the ...

Sparkles

Cspr, Hello again :) I so much love the concept for this poem. The idea of shedding snakeskin, etc, I really do get this idea of reborn/phonexes from the ashes, ...

LosCadaver,

I love when you partake in the poeting, Scar. :)

Hey Drew, I just wanted to welcome you to YWS as I see you're relatively new :3 I do hope that you like it here, and srrsly, if there's anything ...

Pers, Always a pleasure. As someone who reads your stuff religiously, I actually smiled and got all happy!feels while reading this one. I'ma try my hand at looking at this ...

Andrew, C: I see that you're new to YWS, and for that I want to welcome you. If you ever need a piece of poetry looked at, I'm your gal. ...

Hey Deadman, I also love the ease and simple gait of this poem. I personally love the concept and idea behind it as well - I thought this poem was ...

Hey Mucho, Though most likely not a conscious intention on the part of director Kathryne Bigelow or screenwriter Mark Boal, Zero Dark Thirty opens with an allusion: the first few ...

Magpie, Edit;; Pengu and Trident beat me before I submitted this review! xD Those guys are unstoppable! :T So apologies beforehand if things were repeated! I like the poem itself, ...

Hey Mandapanda, First thing I noticed - misspelling in the title! Haha, s'okay. It happens to the best of us. I'm glad to see that the rest of the piece ...

Ikiru, I like the structure of this piece, where you have the first and third stanzas all ending in "me"s and you have the 2nd stanza(more like a line) and ...

Indie, Oh man, I love this. Reading this was literally like sitting back, relaxing, and going along for the ride. It's been a while since I've read a poem on ...