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MaKriege, This review is sponsored by Team Kuzco ;) I hope it will be helpful! So, let's not daddle any longer and get started, shall we? This is a kind ...

Toe, I absolutely love your username/avatar C: -giggles- But let's get to this poem, shall we?! This was a rather interesting, narrative poem. I absolutely love dark themes - I ...

Lylas! Fellow Team Kuzco Member! ;) Your poem has a lot of heart and I think that is -such- an important aspect of writing that a lot of people tend ...

Hoot, I see that you are new to YWS C: I want to welcome you personally! We're a pretty warm and close-knit community. You will find that if you stick ...

Snow, I love fantasies and magic and all of that type of stuff as well, so I'm guilty as charged! I wouldn't have picked up on the fantasy elements of ...

Happy Holidays, Pers! Aww. The minimalism in this works, it creates a kind of humbling and soft effect. The echoes of "forget"/"forgetting" was kind of neat, as was the whole ...

Kylan, :c Did you really just make me feel emotional and empathetic towards rocks? :c That ending really hits hard. There's so much careful crafting in this, I'm like the ...

Karz, I too, began this piece thinking: "oh gawds...please don't do it, please don't do it" because you have to have a lot of balls to find fault with Pound's ...

Imhero, Thank you for being so patient with me C: I'm going to focus this review exclusively on content - I'll try not to go *too* much into mechanics - ...

Disheartenedcat, I'm liking this. I'm loving the simplicity and portrait-esque way of writing. It's crisp, it's refreshing - this doesn't suffer from being overtly melodramatic, as is too often the ...

Gummies! There are lotsa things happening here, and aesthetically it is somewhat pleasing! I can see that you are experimenting with lots of different things, quotations, punctuation, breaks - and ...

Shoaib, This is such a lovely piece and I enjoyed reading it. Mostly because you have this old soul kind of voice and tone that pervades through this piece, it ...

Hahaha I love the title, the puns, the experiments with words - real clever and fun piece. I admit though, my first thought after reading it was how good this ...

I feel like I understand you better, Yoda, my alien friend. I kind of liked the uncapitalized I's :P They reminded me of crop circles 8D ohplease let the spoiler ...

Skyy, Kudos to you for working such a challenging rhyme scheme! This piece looks like it's intended as more of a didactic poem than one that is meant to scare ...