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Milomex, Lovely experimentation in form and content. Is that supposed t o be a mushroom cloud? *ponders* Another point of interest for me was the tone. It's actually quite nice, ...

Beckiw, Aw :) What a cute story and also an interesting concept, the way I picture it is the developing friendship/romance between boy and ghost. I'm wondering if you intend ...

Jas, Amazing and surprising as always. Let me just say, I loved this poem. The imagery of this tree, and the old woman and her fingers, these are some powerful ...

Nargles, I really love the idea and message behind this poem, there's a lot of self empowerment here, and I think it shows especially well through the tone. It’s the ...

Firearris, Glad to see you back :) My first reaction was literally horror. I certainly get this sense of calm before storm. As I was reading, I thought this might ...

567Ajt, Certainly, this is a piece that is fraught with emotion, and even if I didn't know the back-story, I definitely get the sense of the speaker's inner turmoil. The ...

Lauren, I'm writing this as I read your story, so I shall skip the intros and get to reading. Part one. What is the point of view? I could see ...

Pengu! I really enjoyed this work, probably more than you know. I liked this as a prose poem, personally. I think the essence of this work is more prosaic anyways, ...

RileyStone, I was just browsing around and I stumbled onto this. I really enjoyed your experimentation with words and sounds, I do that too, and it's great fun. Your rhythm ...

Mikko! Love it. Absolutely love it. I love the passion behind the voice, the snarky undertones, and the lyrics. This, very much reminds me of a sestina for the effects ...

Dasiamari, Overall this was a cute poem, enjoyable to read. I can see how it's classified as a child's poem, I'm loving some of these effects you have with words ...

Ladyinpurple597, Aw, bittersweet. What can I say, I liked it! :) Overall, I felt the meter and rhythm was well done, it certainly flowed nicely and I like how the ...

Persy, Oh, that poor narrator. So me likes: the setting, the images+descriptions. My favorite part: and he parts muscle from heart and says “You have eaten so much guilt; it ...

Karzin, Oooh, this is interesting. I like this: the sigh of scrunched eyelids I like how the line ties in with the title, while simultaneously making me squirm. I like ...

Speakerskat, I like the thought process behind this piece, I can quite vividly see your ideas and you state them quite clearly. But that's what this becomes - stated ideas. ...