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Hey Autopilot! The title of this poem brought me running to it, I think it alone is beautiful and conveys something meaningful doesn't it? Water seems to me to be ...

Yungcamus, This is an interesting collection of poems, and I think that when you post them all together in a singular work there's a nod that there's a common thread ...

Hey Myjaspercat, I love that you are trying to approach the zombie genre in a new way, that is definitely commendable. With this first part, we definitely get the sense ...

Vince, I really like the concept of this and the creation of bilingual works, I'd love to see more of these types of poems out there.

Morrigan! So this is all just gonna be unfiltered thought commentary that contradicts itself half-way through rather than a review. I hope it helps in someway? Here goes! I found ...

Carolina, There's a solid beat and rhyme scheme in this piece that engages the reader throughout the poem. I especially enjoyed your opener with the Her / Chauffeur lines. I ...

It looks like the poem IS A WHAAAAAALE! Way to start NaPo early! That is gorgeous. It even looks like it's got little fishies inside! :3 I also love your ...

Sagitta! So, Jorah is quite snarky, eh? x) I appreciate that. I appreciate her thoughts in the beginning and feelings of regret, or feelings like she'd be left for dead: ...

Sagitta, I think we open this chapter with thumping of hearts and beating of rain and beating of horse hooves. It's such a weird description to use beating for horse ...

Noelle! So this piece was sad :c I kind of wish there was more, actual dialogue, actual descriptions of the guy other than tall/handsome, it wasn't until the end that ...

Pernicus! This chapter is straight forward enough! We learn the names and jobs of the squad mates, and of course, Dunham is great. I would have liked to see a ...

Pernicus! So, the pause Garett feels as he looks back at the old lady, you fooled me for a second because I'm thinking for sure he's going to go back ...

Hey Semper, So, the beginning of this hide and chase scene I was a bit confused. Due to the prologue and the bolded bit as I'm reading, I'm framed already ...

Skins! How goes the dive? Based on this piece alone, I see you've landed gracefully. Actually, you should write more poetry and/or share more of whatever other poems you have ...

Gema, I actually kind of fell into this piece, I like it in all its brevity. I love the image this creates and the style of it kind of reminds ...