Audy

changed to 'triumphs', thanks guys.

After reading through the previous reviews, I was able to gleam that this poem dealt with child abuse. I think the power of this piece is that it portrays a ...

*snaps fingers*

Hnnnnnnnnng I love this. I'll be back for a proper response, soon

Oh, you know on second thought - I think that by adding the reflections in there, you might be able to fix the "clunkiness" of the narrative - after a ...

Oh! Sorry, I was unclear with my review and I'm sorry if I brought offense in any way. I think this was as clear as day, so don't worry about ...

Everything is intentional, yes ^_^ dn from umop = up / down, upside down. He and she are just people, possible family members or close friends. The importance of them ...

Good question! What you have to understand is the new YWS design is divided into "literary" section and the "forum" section. I have the codes memorized - but for those ...

Woah. Less than subpar - meant to be "anything subpar" ahahaha ;_;

And if I could edit my review, I'd correct my own grammar mistakes v-v (Gee, Audy, how hypocritical of you) My apologies, Cat xD

It's because this piece captures the essential essence of Karzkin. And because it features a clarinet as a symbol of life.

Also, let me know if the flash thing works!

As you should, lol! cause I'm the WORSE ;)

Thank you! You are helpful :D Pears are womanly-shaped, lol x) I aimed for the prose-feel, because I wanted more of a voice/drawl than a lyric/music.

So the length of the ramble should make up for the time it took to finally get back to you, right? Right? Right?