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Re: Prologue
I love this! The descripitons are really good, and I love how you described Doctor and Colonel Watson and their characters. "to the ones that hold the subway system but ...
Oct 20, 2020 -
Re: The first page of my novel - would love to hear what you think
I love this! The descriptions were great, and I could really see where you were. "madness that pissed down his face like sweat" was a little cofusing to me. Did ...
Oct 19, 2020