AydenL

In paragraph 7, the I isn't capitalized. In paragraph 10, couldn't isn't spelled right. In paragraph 11, didn't and tried isn't spelled right. In the third to last paragraph, Confucianism ...

I like how the story is laid out and it all fits together like a puzzle. I wonder if could be less confusing.

Cool Story. I like the overall story. I wonder if there could be a part 2?

This is a cool story! Please make a part 2. I like how everything was laid out so I wasn't confused. The only thing is that there are little to ...

Good story! I loved how you explained the restaurant and every paragraph had a part in the story. The only thing I wonder is if you could indent every paragraph.

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Good story! I loved how you explained the restaurant and every paragraph had a part in the story. The only thing I wonder is if you could indent every paragraph.