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Wait...Phindin is outside with me and cat...how's this supposed to work?

Not sure...looks like it. This doesn't make much sense, anyway...

Karana "There are about six of us, we are not heavily armed, we're travelers, and we just found this village," I explained. I knew she was afraid, unsure, maybe even ...

Adri I bit my tongue, rolling my eyes for a moment. Then I shoved him playfully. "You'll be up against me, y'know!" I teased.

Adri I laughed. "He'd do it to himself eventually, anyway. Don't feel bad!" I pat her on the back of the shoulder. "Besides, I can think of worse scenarios!" *Sorry, ...

Whoa, this is the old one! Dang! It's so much different! You're new one is a lot better, definately. You need to post it!!!

Karana I rushed forward and knelt beside her. A quick look-over told me enough. This girl was blind, she'd gotten lost, and she had inhaled some ash. "You can trust ...

Sounds interesting. Name: Raenya (Ray-in'-yuh) Age: 3 Gender: female species: Gray wolf appearance: charcoal gray with white and black streaks personality: usually calm and quiet, tends to be a loner,

Audra I loved his expression. I had taken him by surprise, and it thrilled me. Not as much as a date did, but it still thrilled me. I turned around ...

Karana I could hear it. I could hear lightning... Warren? Luke? They weren't Ilum, but they were better than no one. I began to run towards the source, and found ...

Warren Slow. Strong but slow. Got it! A little lightning wouldn't hurt, but it certainly would cause a commotion! I fired bolt after bolt, trying to keep the cave troll ...

Timea-chan... Now time for MY critiques! :D :lol: Warm blood on cold skin. A kunai driven deep into an opponent’s chest. The hoot of an owl. And a full moon. ...

(Sweet. You got it.) Warren "Luke?!" I called. Finally, somebody answered me! I'd been calling for the past thirty minutes! Unfortunately, I couldn't find a way down...I was hanging from ...

(I could take over for Warren if you wanted me to...Sasquash probably won't come back. I've already talked to him.)

Adri I woke when I heard Matt swear - quite loudly - from the Quidditch pitch. He had the bludgers out again. I got up, quickly dressed, and made my ...