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Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry
That was bloody brilliant! Haha :p But seriously, that summed up all the thoughts I was feeling but couldn't put into words. If only characters like Hermione and Neville were ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Literary Journal Cover
Ahhh this is so beautiful! I like the rainbow, the color looks like it's just flowing off the page. What kind of paint did you use? (haha just wondering) The ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
Hi everyone! I'm BanditToph. I enjoy writing, and I'm using this site to help myself improve. Constructive criticism is welcome!!!
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Another Trip to the Zoo
Those are really elegant. Your camera takes really great pictures, and you are a fantastic photographer!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: to fill a space
It's a really cool poem. I feel bad saying this, but I feel like the poem jumped around a lot and didn't really stay on topic. I think it would ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)
That was really beautiful! Usually poems that rhyme like that sound cheesy, but you made it sound really elegant. I loved how you tied in your own experiences along with ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.
That was really, really, deep. I liked it a lot. (:
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Angel in the Skies- Kate
That's amazing! The colors are so vibrant! I would praise it more, but I'm not really an artist so...... Yep. You did a lot better than I would have done!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Hope
I am hope. I am free to be what you wish, You may mold me and shape me, and do what you please. I have been disregarded, ignored, and shut ...
Mar 31, 2011