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Re: An angel sent from heaven above
She led her to a home I believe that should be "was led" in past tense. I bet your little sister is a little angel. :)
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Re: I heard the Voice of The Void, humanity's stalker.
It was good but slow to getting to the whole point of it all. Don't get me wrong. I loved the descriptions.
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Re: Twenty-Fourth floor
This is a very interesting piece. It took me a while to really get hooked into it. I was confused about who was speaking and of what gender the speaker ...
Dec 4, 2010