Basil

You have helped a lot. I don't know how to thank you any more than I am!!!! And so, I'm going to change the ending!!! It was boring and cliche, ...

Oh thank you so much!!!! It means so much to hear how much you love my writing!!! And I'm actually from Australia XD, and maybe I could be wrong with ...

Helps a lot, yes ;) thank you!!! I will edit the story and fix my mistakes, but when I have the whole story up, I will do some major editing, ...

Thanks!! And I shall edit that mistake!!

Thank YOU for the lovely review!! I shall fix my mistakes, and I totally understand what you've said!! Though I'd just like to say ... *giggles* the MC is female ...

Thanks for pointing those out!!! helped a lot ;)

Thanks heaps!!! And yes, your rambling helped ;) please enjoy the chapters!!

Thanks heaps!!! I'll fix that bit too ;)

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OMG thank you so much!!! I shall do lots of reviews then so I can have up the next chapter!!

It is truly beautiful!! You are talented, and managed to pull of the soppy love stuff well! Plus, adding in the Shakespeare elements didn't make it any less amazing!! I ...

Thank you!

Thanks. I will take to account what you said, and hopefully my final draft will be better!! ^^

Thank you. And I will when I edit ;)

I love it! The comedy is brilliant!! Keep writing, I'm definitely going to continue reading this!! ;)