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Baylee

  • Other Poetry Re: Storm

    yeah, the structure was supposed to create a "stream of thoughts" if you know what i mean. disjointed and a bit jolty? Also i tried using simple words to make ...

    Nov 15, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Whisperings over Africa's plains (1)

    Africa seems so far away when you locate it on a map. And an eight and a half hour plane journey really isn't that bad. But the experience you get ...

    Nov 14, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi people!

    Hi my name is Baylee, I am eighteen (but no way near adult status) love writing poetry and stories, love constructive criticism, I'm a bit brutal, but not horrible! Lol, ...

    Nov 14, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: a poem for her

    I'm not sure why, but this poem didn't seem to be what i thought it was going to be. In fact it was quite hollow in the way it lacked ...

    Nov 14, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Storm

    lightning flashes thunder rolls I curl my little finger into the crook of yours Like a little girl scared of monsters Lurking under my bed. Never could walk through the ...

    Nov 13, 2007


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"