BeautifulDoom

Dude, rate your stuff. There's kids on this site.

Thanks MattRaven24! I already posted Chapters Two and Three if you wanna read them. Thanks for the compliment :] I loved The Diary of Anne Frank, too.

Thanks Lucy! I appreciate the review :] Yeahh, I researched a bunch of stuff forthis story for it to be as accurate as possible. Thanks again! BeautifulDoom :]

Haha, I only named it Faking It because you paste on a fake smile for all the people you hate, pretending they're your friends. Thank you for the possitive feedback!

Sorry about the messed up paragraphs! Haha just ignore them, I had to type the whole thing on my iPod.

I love this.

Whoah, I love this. Intense words and message. You're really good at this, keep writing! :]

Okay, so I've had a lot of comments today, so I'll address them one by one. :D Kaywiia (love your username btw!): Thanks for saying you love this :] Haha ...

Hmm. No, you definitely didn't come across as rude :] I see what you're saying...especially the part about how I was focusing more on the heat than on the actual ...

Weird weird weird. If this kinda stuff is what you want to write about, then okay. But why are they wolves? That's just creepy. I agree with Kyllorac.

Awesome first chapter :D It really made me think, and was also a cliff hanger at the end, which I love reading. I can't wait for Part Two!

Thanks for the feedback! Haha I don't want to give anything away, but the reason I described how she looks so thoroughly is because it plays a major role in ...

LMFAO. someone has some serious sugar highs XD

This is beautiful, you have real talent. I love how you phrased the words. Great job!

Hmmm, I really like this. It gives an image of what you're talking about, but it's also intense. Awesome!