BeautifulDoom

Whoah. Intense. I really like this! The description and wording are awesome, it gives an image inside my head. Very scary, too. :] I can hardly wait for Chapter Two! ...

Mhm, I definitely see your point. I'm going to develop a bond between my main character and her mother very soon, mainly because I want to show whoever is reading ...

Thank you so much!:] I'm not sure how to do a quote within a quote, so I just took a random guess :D I'll definitely look into it for my ...

Haha thank you, I've been worried about how it would turn out since it's my first chapter and I'm also new here. :] Thanks for the comment, and I'll definitely ...

This is absolutely beautiful and well written. Good job!

This is really good, I like it because it's short and sweet but also meaningful. Good job!

I really really like this. The story line seems great, and I can really relate to it. I have a sister who's only a little younger than me, so I ...