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BeautifulJewel

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Under the Setting Sunlight

    I really did enjoy this. I think (like that person above said) that there were some good rymings ect and i think taht you coudl go quite well if you ...

    Oct 19, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Grandad's Bench

    That was VERY GOOD in my opinion. I thoroughly enjoyed that. But i think you should keep going and write more and more and soon you will become Better and ...

    Oct 18, 2007


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