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Re: Shade (working title) - Chapter 1
Hey MoonlightAssassin, I really like the over all narrative in this chapter. I like that you insinuate with out directly telling us that Hotaru is gay, it makes it more ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
I here by reserve this here spot for my 2010 year book message.
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Where the Mullein Grows
Hey Ice, This was really nice. I have a few questions and little bits I'm going to pick out but only to understand better. I know that these things are ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: If I Must Die
This was a pleasure to read. I didn't care about the intended context because I created my own. I could pick at it and find tiny little things that you ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Existence of God
At the risk of jumping into an argument of which I have no back information on, I have to agree with Nate that everyone should be accepting of other peoples ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: I Slept Alone
Hey Night, This was an interesting read. I find my self agreeing with Seemingly in the sense that I couldn't really find a story or anything like that within this ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: I left you in winter
Thanks Everyone for the reviews! Night, I'll be sure to go over it and try to incorrporate some of your suggestions. Also, With the word Realise/realize, I'm Aussie and that's ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: So Bradford Wrote
So, when I read, "This is an acrostic poem" I kind of went to hit the return button. After actually looking at it though, I was Amazed (I wish I ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: I left you in winter
Really unsure about this! I could take a fair guess at what you might say about it so PLEASE review. This is just a piece I wrote late one night, ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Waltz of the Rose
Hey Nightshade, This was amazing. I understood what you meant about the tearing down of the blinds as i read the rest of the stanza but ti is slightly ambiguous. ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Touchable
Hey, I disagree with Lindsey. I liked the mess and I understand where you're coming from when you talk about not writing in a traditional manner. I also find that ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: I had a dream last night.
Thanks for the reviews guys! BeckFletch. xx
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: I had a dream last night.
I had a dream last night. You were there wearing your leather jacket with your laptop bag cutting across your body. Your hair was its usual black, spiked like the ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Inquiries for my Fellow Men
Hey, Good to hear from you. The Structure of this piece is very different. It definitely suits the title as it simply is food for thought. I guess I'll just ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Scheherazade
Hey Jag, Awesome story! I like how there was this sense of discomfort for the reader throughout the whole thing, as if you knew something wasn't right with the shadows ...
Nov 1, 2010
