BeckFletch.

Galerius, I just wanted to say that I think your comments were unwarranted. You open by telling StreetRat that 'it's really not OK' that her poem is short. I think ...

Hey Snick, I really liked this. There's so much passion and pain which makes it so awesome! There are a few little things that big me but it's just me ...

Hey StreetRat, First I would like to say Good Job! It's a very interesting poem. It does need some work as the others have said but I'm going to give ...

I realise this is an old post but I was intrigued when reading the replies. My first interpretation was that it was purely about the nature of conformity. In my ...

Wow. Harsh crit. much guys? Chill. Just to reflect on what the others have said, i disagree with lilymoore about the jerkiness of those lines. I like what LRA said ...

I really liked this! :) Possibly the one criticism I have is that I found the rhythm in the first lines of the first two stanzas was hard to feel, ...

I kind of agree with eyesxsewnxopen. I see the pain and the rejection and how the narrator is trying to pass through life. I also agree with what she is ...

Hey StoryWeaver! Wow. well it's been a while since I've reviewed anything but here it goes! Oh, and my interpretation of this poem may be COMPLETELY different from what you ...

There's rain on my window pain, and I'm crying, Yea I'm crying. There's rain on my face today, I'm not crying, you can't see me crying. Why's everyone asking me, ...

This is REALLY good. I really liked it and usually I find it hard to lie lyrics without the music with it but this is good. REALLY good!!! BeckFletch. xx

[i] I'm not a poet so sorry if this is really quite bad. It's blank verse so has absolutely no structure what so ever. I decided to have a go ...

Hey, Writing a poem about the fires was a great thing to do. I went through these fires and witnessed them first hand so I can tell everyone who is ...

Hey, I'm not really critiquing here. Just wondering in your first line "From the very moment my eyes fell upon you, alone on sandy beach" did you mean Sandy beach ...

Hey! I liked this poem. I do, however, agree with Spring grain with the first line "controversial is for the brave". It should be Controversy but in doing that you ...

Hey, I've just finished studying Russian rev. and I love history so here's to hoping I can be of some assistance. Most of the info I have for you is ...