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This is the edited version but I still think it needs work so if you can PLEASE reply. It would be greatly appreciated. Also, if I end up writing more ...

Hey there, I really liked this piece. It was easy to read and just enjoyable. There is one or two things that bug me though. Breathtaking, laced, white snowflakes, merry, ...

This is a nice, simple, short poem. It flowed pretty well but there is one thing that bugged me a little. I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that ...