Becky2421

Interesting work of art Stranger! Complex to understand straight away but pretty good when message was unveiled and revealed out after several attempts. Well I see no one has done ...

Wow here for another review(again), This was interesting. I see you had a beautiful message behind this figurative poem. I like the title, it suits the poem naturally. I see ...

Wow beautifully written love! Love it! I don't know what the creature is of but when I read your poem it gave it all away. Powerfully structured. Your imagery was ...

OKay! Here for a review. Now your poem is pretty much simple and alright to me. It portrays reasons why people cry. The message your conveying is not hidden but ...

Okay wow! First to say, I thought that you quoted it somewhere but then I saw that you twisted it around into your own creativity and idea. I like the ...

Okay! becky here for a quickie review. (Please do not take it personal, I just like to tell people straight off what exactly they should know about especially what they ...

This was constructed wonderfully! I like your choice of vocabs, they really implement this poem. Though there where no rhymes, it was still pleasing to the ear. Very moving and ...

Hey there dropout212, Lovely poem you got there :) I like your theme behind this poem. This can relate to those heart-breaks out there. This poem can totally calm and ...

I always like short poems like this. I like it! So simple and enlightening. But to me this was, needed some more words and lines to make it a whole. ...

Hey there SINGHEM, First of all, i like the idea in which your poem is trying to convey to reciters. Yep! Have to admit, i do miss the no-stress days ...

Hey TheCloackworkConjurer, (wow quite a mouthful of name? username?) Basically this poem is simple and the scene is laid out clear. Your choice of descriptive words were good and gave ...

Okay here for some quickie suggestions to spice up this poem. First of all, I LOVE this layout/structure of your poem! Very captivating! SUGGESTIONS: 1. You should sum up or ...

Hey Adnamarine, Yipee! First one to review this new poem. First of all... Wow! I love your theme or message in this poem. Trees! Yep a perfect topic or subject ...

Okay wow! Very descriptive giving a clear view of the scene in this poem. I like the idea that you compared the monks dressed in white to angels on the ...

WOW! Now thats what i call a delicious piece of cake you got there darling. You definitely are the spokes women of females this days. Have to admit this poem ...