BelarusBirdy

(OOC: Thanks Tally. Sovvy everyone!!!) Storm: I was hesitant about letting Leroy get anywhere near the child, but he seemed okay. I watched him closely though. I wasn't going to ...

This is a pretty accurate depiction of what I believe depression to be like, except I never thought of it as a door. I think of it being like you ...

My new white dress floats gently around my ankles. It's too short. Everything my parents buy me is. At five foot ten, I tend to stand out in the middle ...

Not really creepy, more honest. Great poem! Keep Writing, Bel

I like it. A lot. Sorry this is short. Just wanted to say that. I certainly will facebook you. Keep Writing, Bel

My family and I went to see it in Chicago. It's amazing!!!!!!!! :D I love it! I love at the end of "Defying Gravity" when she flies up in the ...

Storm: Everyone follows Leroy. Okay. I can follow too. "Just escape," I repeat over and over. In my head, of course. "These people don't mean anything to me. I can ...

Hi! I'm Bel, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. First, let me start by talking about the general things. Your rhyme scheme could have been a bit cliched, but ...

It's a little difficult to review it without it being here, but I would like to say I thought the emotions in this piece were strong and very apparent as ...

Whoa! This is really good! I love it! It's easy to understand, a quick read, not long, not too deep and full of meaningful hidden little secrets. I like it. ...

I'm still reading this, don't worry. It's an amazing story. I kind of want to print it out and read it again and again. OR you could get it published. ...

Just so you all know, I wrote this while I was half-asleep and just found out I was moving. Again. I'm just going to point out that most of us ...

This is, simply put, beautiful. I love the natural feel of it, raw and imperfect, but it all works and flows smoothly. It makes me think of the rain (obviously!) ...

Okay, that is really weird. :) Sounds like something I would say. Quietly. In the middle of math class. Or maybe science class. Wow. This reminds me of all my ...

Welcome to YWS, first of all. I really like your poem, it's a wonderful idea. I think the rhyme scheme is good. I see you've discovered "slant rhymes," so your ...