BenFranks

Haha :P

Haha (: Thankyou for the feedback XP

Haha, thankyou AAAM :)

Haha. Glad you enjoyed it. Thankyou for the feedback :)

Haha, thankyou for the feedback :)

Haha, well written.

Feedback's always helpful so thankyou! :D

Thanks for the feedback Moriah :)

Haha, glad you enjoyed it :P Er, Matt Damon isn't my favourite of all actors, I think I should leave it at that :D

Thanks Moriah :)

Haha, thanks for the help guys. :) Ben

Thanks a million BeautifulDoom! Packs of positive feedback, really makes me feel good about writing! Love it! Cheers again. Ben (P.S ~ Pro review method :D)

Oh, and another thing :) I'd have a quick look over lines like this: Turned to gold his grand grub and draught I didn't notice this during my first post ...

Hey there! I'm around to it atlast, so sorry for the await :D Any'oo like usual my thoughts and suggestions are in the italic coloured writing. I hope it's not ...

Hi. That was different, I'll grant you that. Keep up the writing. Ben