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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Don't Be Scarred

    I REALLY liked this. I thought the plot was excellent and I was totally engrossed by the storyline. I thought the character development was excellent as it was completely realistic ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Machine

    The idea that you have used is great but using only dialogue I wouldn't have. I would still keep those lines but have parts in-between. For example, when Wilson first ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: My horror leads to unexpected death

    I thought this was a really good idea because most people have special childhood toys that are special so this plays on a great idea for horror. I would have ...

    Mar 10, 2014


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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