BethanJones0506

Thank you for the feedback, the love interest is a trainee teacher at her school so is definitely a forbidden loce. I%u2019ll work on making it more obvious about that ...

I'd also really appreciate it if you could review my improved version when i post it !

Thank you so much for your reply and all the advice you have given me. I will take this on board when editing and expanding what I have written. Thanks ...