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Er...I feel awful for asking this way but I really do need reviews, so if you wanna take a look...*trails off* Honestly, you don't have to read the first one ...

Thanks for the review. ^^ I'm not so sure about the "example example... example" thing, though; because I've always thought it was right (and Word doesn't scream at me when ...

Thanks for the review. ^^ Thanks for pointing out the nitpick, too, though I'm sure if you could do it for one sentence you could do it for the others? ...

Thanks for the review, and glad you liked it. ^^ Though I didn't find it much romantic...more angsty than anything. But blecchh. You had a few problems with tense here ...

Thanks for the review. ^^ But come on...I'm sure there's something not to like in here. >_> I mean, this is my first try so something's bound to be screwed ...

I took in consideration your critiques--particularly on the final portion (where I start saying "Let's hope...". Looking back, I realize you have a point when you say it doesn't jibe ...

Thanks so much for the review. ^^ But first of all-- *you only need one hyphen, not two This "-" is called a dash. Two of them put together is ...

Well...here's the rest of chapter two. Sorry for not posting sooner. I was busy pretending to study for the PSAT. Ah, so much subversion. Here it goes-- “Quid pro quo, ...

Yeesss...this is better than the first draft, and I can definitely appreciate how hard you've worked--particularly if you've been editing this for a month. An excellent sense of commitment there. ...

Okay, here's the rest of the review. I'll try to be less nitpicky than before, but...I doubt I'll be able to. Sorry if I'm neurotic! >_> Bring. Huh? What's this ...

personally like to focus on the "Big Picture" and the "Idea". Perhaps Zan prefers characterization and enjoys watching characters interact. I enjoy watching characters interact as well, but only if ...

Doesn't matter if it's late--I welcome all reviews. :D (though I'd like to start getting critiques from a more diverse set of offense but seems like the same two people ...

Thanks for the critique. :) (note I have no idea if you did this after reading my PM or before, so...if you haven't, the end part of the PM will ...

3) What do you mean the whole Plush concept doesn't work? Maybe I should have mention that these are magical plush dolls that can walk and make noise in some ...

Whaat? I'm sure there's more to tear apart than that. >_> Well...this first chapter is actually my favorite one so far. The other ones I've written so far (the second ...