BigBadBear

Even though I know nothing about poetry, I really enjoyed 'paperclip'. I thought it was different enough for my taste. I suggest you do something completely different. All of these ...

testing EDIT: Okay, that's weird. The BBC codes in my blog aren't working. I just tried to put a bunch of photos up in my blog, all with the code, ...

Haha, this is a great musical. My favorite song is the first one; the one where he's in the laundry mat. It's great! -Jared

I'm doing this! I love writing poems, even if I suck at them. -Jared

Dumas was better than friends, anyway. Oh totally. Okay, so, this was really disgusting. But in a great way. I love the fact that you can take a bloody tub ...

Okay. So I'm really happy. I've finished my math, and I've read this, which is becoming sort of an amazing story. So I love your characters. They seem so much ...

Holly, I like your poems. They are simple, yet they hide an underlying message that I think you want the world to hear. Tiptoeing over lives, I sing idyllic melodies. ...

Luckily, His brother had bought him first-class tickets, Fix that. The pilot could not hide his shock in his announcement. No, I don't like this sentence very much. It sounds ...

i. have you ever attended ____a funeral of a doubt? the dismal gloom arrays itself in a sullen line of broken minds. ____the procession drum, drum, drums on ____in a ...

Here is the math: If I did it right, I have been recieving an average of 2.3 PMs everyday since I have joined. If you divide 10,000 by 2.3, it ...

Suzanne, I found this much more enjoyable than the last chapter. I like the fact that we got to get into Manfried's mind a little bit more, and also Aline. ...

Suzanne, I liked this. I'm not crazy about it, but I'm liking it so far. I hope it will be something more than a cutter story. Angsty stories tend to ...

Also, if you have PC tokens (Proper Critiques) or FM tokens (Fanmix), you can cash them in here. In my case, I have 1 FM token. So, in order to ...

For some reason, I was under the impression that this was going to be a piece set in past, circa 1890-1900. I'm not sure why I thought that; probably because ...

OK. I'm sorry that I haven't been reading these, but now I'm here, and hopefully I can get through a few in the limited time I have. Chewing on the ...