BigBadBear

First off, ditch the second paragraph. "Haha, not!" is not working for this piece. The main problem with this is I think the tone needs to be formal. Right now, ...

Hey, Kylan! I'm sorry, I only have time to critique the first scene. I have to get going, but I just wanted to leave my two cents. It was done ...

My friends. I can't live without them, or with them. 'o' -Jared

Hello! Welcome to YWS! It's a rule here that we don't post one of our stories until we have at least reviewed two things. Please do that and then you ...

Sam, You suck. -Jared PS: How come you write so awesomely? You make all of the rest of us writers look terribly lame. I bow before your awesomesauce presence. Ooh! ...

Holy crap. That's all I have to say about this movie. -Jared

I'm not entirely sure why BigBadBear said the piece's meter was perfect, because I didn't hear any... I don't generally use any particular meter, I can't... it's just not how ...

Red apples drop where worms infest happily. Steep corners where witches fly. You say 'where' twice. >.> You already know that I love these poems. They are terrific. -Jared

Hey! This is my first post ever in artwork, and I know that this really isn't that good, but this is me. Or... what I would look like in Bear ...

Well. That was frightening. You had some major comma issues though. The daemon claws, [nix this comma] at the closed door, Gurgling noises escaping from her mouth. I hear her, ...

Duh. Weren't you guys there when it happened? The calender maker quit because his hand hurt too much. He didn't want to go on any further. I saw it happen. ...

Alizz, This was a pretty good start. It’s been done to death though. I’m not really one to read all of this angsty teen things. As long as this steers ...

heart

Holy crap. Holly. This. Is. Ultra. Epically. Amazing. No crappin' you. I love it. You are such a fantastic artist! You should submit this to like... I dunno. An art ...

Known for writing a kick butt musical with me. -Jared