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Re: The City of Bane ( edited)
Hiya! I like what you're coming of off. But I do think we could use a bit more context! Such as a little on Scarlett and Jake's past? How they ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: A Promising Future
Heyo! Jinx here for a review! Well.. I think a review. 0.o As said below, I'm not sure how to review this.. Hm.. Well.. I am certainly /not/ a poetry ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Blue Moon: Darkness Chapter 1: Desolate
Hello! Ash here for a review! Awesome story! I caught no spelling or grammar mistakes, unless I read over. I just kind of wish the creature was described a bit ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1- Knocks on a Door
Hello! Ash here for a review! Alrighty so, I caught no spelling mistakes, unless I read over them. Its worded nicely and the paragraphs aren't too long or short. The ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: The Secret of the Flutterby
Hello! Ash here for a review! =) I love the story! Very original and creative~ So, no spelling caught (unless I auto-corrected in my head and skipped over it..). The ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Remember, please
Hello! Ash here for a review! I'll be honest, I'm not an amazing poet, and I don't review poems a lot. When I see a good poem, I have to ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Jane Elizabeth Smith~ Prologue
Hello! Ash here for a review! Lovely prologue, nicely written! So, I caught no spelling mistakes(Unless my min auto-corrected and I skipped over it 0-0). I also liked the way ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Intoxicated I love you
Hello! Ash here for a review~ Alrighty, nice story you got here. I didn't spot any spelling errors, unless of course I Auto-corrected in my mind and read over it. ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: The Girl Who Wasn't There
Hello! Ash here for a review! Great poem! Kinda described me well. ^-^ I caught no mistakes (Though I don't write poetry a lot o.o). It was written nicely too! ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character
Hello! Ash here for a Review! Hilarious! I was laughing the whole way through. They are all very true though. Whenever I read a book and their is a serial ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: The Ride (Excalibur)
Hello! Ash here for a Review! Alright, good story! Just confused by the first sentence- "Screams and shouts could be heard in the distance as there was no line in ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Inner Battle
Hello! Ash here for a review! Harsh, and true. War is not the grand thing some people make it out to be, this is the truth of it. I love ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Walking Survival - One
Hello! Ash Here for a Review! Yes! First chapter! Awesome work on it, drew me in from the first paragraph (As did the prologue)! Found no grammar, spelling, and other ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Mirror Mirror
Hello! Ash here for a review! Firstly - I love this! (Wish there was more to read. :)) I didn't catch any grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes. (Unless of course ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: Walking Survival - Prologue
Hello! Ash here for a review~ First off - Great story line, can't wait to read more! As for grammar and spelling, I caught no mistakes, unless I missed them. ...
Apr 15, 2015