BlackAshes

Thanks for the review.~ It was a bit rushed, seeing as I try to update each Friday and school is kicking my butt. My style of writing is a bit ...

Thanks for the review! I'll correct those mistakes and also edit the thing about the blood and password.

Thanks! Sadly all of my first chapters tend to be boring x-x I shall have to work on putting a bit more 'Oomf' Into them! ^^;

Thank you for the review! And also for pointing out those mistakes especially with the ET password. - I shall have to edit all this. Thanks again! :)

Thanks for the review! :) They're not fast actually, but all that will be explained later on~ I like leaving cliffhanger prologues, Hehe. cx

Psst, "He knew that the doctor meant well, but he couldn't get himself to trust Sycamore yet." You called the doc Sycamore before Zade asked his name ^.^

Thanks! I try to slow the pace a bit because I have a problem of writing fast paced. I could be halfway through the story in the second chapter sometimes ...

Thanks! & Yeah, this is still a WIP, working out all the kinks >.

Thanks! Still trying to come up with a good name for the sword.. >.< My brain just refuses to produce ideas sometimes..

Thanks! And thanks for following me! :) Ash actually isn't a scientist, it comes out later why she was in a lab also. I am working off of one big ...

Thanks! Yeah.. Comma addict here x-x Shall edit!