BlackDove

I lay, curled up on the ground. Sy shivered underneath my coat, his wing held awkwardly. i panted in pain. the gang that had beaten me and stolen my money ...

has anyone ever read His Dark Materials? if you haven't don't worry but it's a VERY good book. i particularly liked the idea that your sould could take the form ...

I am BlackDove :D but i am also someone else! I had registered myself as a new person here in YWS! Your mission (should you accept it) is simple. You ...

Feeding Chapter 6 The next few months were terrible. Skye’s heart began to beat again, coming back with a painful jerk that made him gasp and double over. For the ...

Mr. Phantom Chapter 5 6,000 years later I sat on the floor with my back to the wall, watching the guests come and go. I wasn’t enjoying my parents’ party. ...

I like the detail here in the trees but i think the colours could be worked on. also, somehow making your artwork sharper and less blurred that could work. But ...

A Darren shan fanfic here! This is one of my first Crepsley+Arra fics, so please don’t hunt me down if it sucks. Please read and review. Unfortunately, this is just ...

this is very sad and beautiful. i am not too good at reviewing and critiqing poetry, but i enjoyed this. i agree that you used the reptition affectively and it ...

“We’re not afraid of you, elf! We’ve already wounded you, and we can do it again!” there is nothing wrong with this grammatically. But there is something rather cliché about ...

The Embrace Chapter 4 “No, please…” he begged. “Not again. I can’t do this again…” “What’s so hard about it,” she teased. “All you have to do is lay back ...

The Werewolves Cult Chapter 3 Cocking his bow silently, Skye got ready for the hunt. He was the swiftest, the most careful, absolutely silent hunter in the village. And he ...

“I have come to reclaim the lands of a once great people. All I want is for you and your men to leave. Go home to your cities. Once I ...

“True enough, but ye forget I have years of experience on my side mate I am sure you mean “but YOU forget” I am not sure Garret would be posh ...

from the flash from the muzzles of their weapons. A bit clumsy, you could try to reverse it. and pushed his chin down and brought his knife across the man's ...

with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached this is a bit repetitive. Try to use a different word than brown greying brown hair, brown eyes, again, “brown” must ...