BlackDove

“True enough, but ye forget I have years of experience on my side mate I am sure you mean “but YOU forget” I am not sure Garret would be posh ...

from the flash from the muzzles of their weapons. A bit clumsy, you could try to reverse it. and pushed his chin down and brought his knife across the man's ...

with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached this is a bit repetitive. Try to use a different word than brown greying brown hair, brown eyes, again, “brown” must ...

“He panted with pain” this doesn’t seem the right word to me. I would be yelling “a grin borne from blood lust while he reached for his long dirk. “ ...

wow, this was really good I really enjoyed it alot. it was like something you read in one of those epic poetry books. not really my taste, poetry, but this ...