BlackGlove

Thank you very Much

thank you for your review i will take everything u said into consideration and fix anything that is wrong with my story

This story is really good i like it and i dont like alot of stories like this but this was really interesting. i honestly can say that i would like ...

this is actually very good :) i dont usualy like poems but this one is really really good

This is my first ever story so please leave a comment telling me if i should continue with it or not and please feel free to give me some constructive ...