Blackwood

If you are a japan nut then you should know that Akira is a male name XD

Just press enter to make a paragraph. And I wont say until you fix those dashes -

Thank you for pointing out those two little typos which spell checks wont pick up, although I disagree with your semicolon, I took a look but it wouldn't make sense.

Oh wait you meant the poem.

I really enjoyed it though.

This isn't a review but I just want to point out something that bothered me in the first line. Ariana slowed her Arabian to a halt What you wrote here ...

Ohhhh. Ok

Also what do you mean about no-punctuation? I assure you that everything I write has proper punctuation in it.

Manoeuvres is correct. I speak British English, not american English.

Mimi, I feel like you are just going around copying all my reviews halfheartedly.

Its called the publishing centre. It doesn't let you do linebreaks.

Nah its all good. I'll just throw you in some pineapple juice.

That wasn't a review bro...

GO TO CH1 before you read ch6!!! The whole thing is mystery/drama, you cheater

Well if you like it, you'll have to read the previous chapters. I know quite a few of them are in the green room still, so have fun.