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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: To tickle your fancy

    Hello. Let`s see what you have here. The day had started out cool with a cloudy sky. Things had gotten difficult after noon and there was simply no easy way ...

    May 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Introduction - please give feedback

    Salve. First, before I start cutting and slicing up (in a good way of course), I have to tell you that I only want to help. And also feel free ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Where The Music Is

    Hi... First of all I really like your story, but it lacks somethings and those somethings are descriptions. I was running so fast you couldn’t even imagine. Never write "you ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Flameshore

    My first review. I kinda checked around to see how it`s done and hopefully I`ll get you a helpful review. Muse planted her hands on her hips. Was the arrow ...

    May 30, 2010


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