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Originally, it had great breaks and spacing in the lines, but it didn't transfer over when I copied it. I know I really should go back and fix it. Hopefully ...

I absolutely love this! The last line ties the entire poem together. Great job. I love the idea of her seeing her own coffin, and of how he "killed" her. ...

I really love this. It totally has potential for a longer story, but I love it how it is. Your style is amazing. It flows so well! Good job.

Short, simple, and to the point. I love it. I also love how you can make me remember some sensual moments of my own. Great writing. :)