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Evi--done! Well written! Maki-Chan--You posted in a lot of threads and you've had a lot of reviews and they're mostly very comprehensive. And, since I'm busy at the moment, I ...

Hey! Here by request. I see you've already had a load of great reviews, so I'll skip the nitpicks and focus on anything I might be able to add. :wink: ...

I mean, the world's human population is exploding, so we might as well contain it. Human spontaneous combustion has been shown to be myth. ;) Pshh. xD

I feel like posting in this thread. Can't remember if I already have or not. Anyhow, I don't care if it's murder or not; but the mother and father should ...

:shock: Woah... I love those taps. xD

buuuuuuuuuuuuuump. I know that no one likes me but come on. I'm reviewing here!

The launch codes. have not done anything besides ban a couple people in that timeframe. That made me laugh. xD Not sure why...

If there's no reason for her to defeat the antagonist, why bother? It won't be believable and would seem too black and white; try giving them a chance to understand ...

If she's some wonder girl, I want her to die. If she has flaws, I'd like her to do something for herself before she dies. If she just dies and ...

Hullo, there, Wolf! Here by request. :) Looks like an interesting poem! I'll go through each line and give my opinion and such. Life is a ship: follow no map ...

Bump. Make me do something. I'm lazy.

Hello, yes, hello there. Mind if I take a look? I thought not. =) I walked through the overgrown brush, kicking anything in my way. Weird. Firstly, why would he ...

... Wow. That was really helpful. You brought up a lot of key points, so thanks for that :) . I'm actually modernising it a lot, and it's more "believable". ...

Oh, I've read that! Nice poem. Creepy, but brilliant. And thanks for the advice. =)

This looks great, but it's very opinion-based and a bit of a popularity contest. But! I shall have a look some more. :)