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BlueLangton

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Things I Wish I Would've Told My Mom

    Yeah, I had a hard time categorizing this! Thank you so much for your feedback!

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Turning upside down

    This is really nice. I don't personally understand it very well, but I'm sure you do. It feels like this is more of a poem written for the author not ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Passed Around

    Beautiful! Short and sweet, but deep and packed with meaning. You aren't afraid to write about yourself. This poem is very well written,and I enjoyed it very much.

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You say, and I believe.

    This poem is great. It is stuffed tight with metaphors, but it still stays consistently realistic. You describe your heartbreak in such an open manner, and I am very impressed. ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An ordinairy day with a roommate

    I loved it! your short story is well written and creative, even just for a story about mosquitoes. It flowed and read very well, while staying on topic and keeping ...

    Jun 7, 2014


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear