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BlueSquare here to review your piece! I really enjoyed this and it was a cute little story. I loved how it had its mature parts intertwined with its fun parts, ...

BlueSquare here, to reivew your piece! I really enjoyed this piece. I liked how their was a distant struggle between the mortal and the magical world, and that people with ...

I really enjoyed this story. There were a few little things that I noticed that you could change to make the story a bit better, though. Like whitepencil said, your ...

I'll admit, this was a little confusing to me. First you're talking about a child and his tummy, then you're talking about glass jars, then gentle wings. I felt like ...

I really enjoyed this piece. Obviously, different people get different things out of it. Here is what I got: The story is about a girl who thinks she is ugly ...

This piece was unremarkably astounding. I loved how it captured the girls' feelings so well--like you were right there, right beside her, listening to her get upset. You understood the ...

I felt that this short story was very captivating and interesting. I felt as I was a spectator, right beside the action in the story. The characters had very unique ...